This felt very raw. The tension between awareness and vulnerability is tangible. She seems to see what's happening and still can't step out of it. I kept wishing she wouldn't give so much of herself away for “this tiny bit of love”.
Thank you for reading my work. I wish "she" wouldn't either. You should read my post "slave brain". It explains some of my mental condition a bit better. 💗I appreciate the comment it means a lot to me.
Ok, I didn’t know what to expect, but I really liked it. It went from playful, to nerdy, to deeply emotional. It felt like being on a rollercoaster. But I didn’t feel any cringe.. There’s warmth to your writing. That’s a very nice read!❤️
Also I forgot to credit the artist I work with her name is Jean Woods. She does all the art I use for my Substack posts and all my art for my book as well.
Liza, this is incredibly evocative! You have a gift for tactile prose. I could feel the rough denim, the metal-scented sweater, and the heat of the beaver fur. Nice work!
You are not alone again! You have thoughts with you forever, which will generate heat in icy cold atmosphere in the Arctic region. You are not alone forever! He will be waiting very eagerly to spend the rest of his life with you.
And... Sorry that it didn't go the way you maybe wanted. At least some beautiful art and likely deeper wisdom emerged. Your Authenticity expressed is such Medicine!!! 💯✨️
Thank you, Cora. I definitely get some amazing art out of my experiences. I might want different but I still have this and I am grateful. Lonely, but grateful. ❤️
This felt very raw. The tension between awareness and vulnerability is tangible. She seems to see what's happening and still can't step out of it. I kept wishing she wouldn't give so much of herself away for “this tiny bit of love”.
Thank you for reading my work. I wish "she" wouldn't either. You should read my post "slave brain". It explains some of my mental condition a bit better. 💗I appreciate the comment it means a lot to me.
I will! I've been reading so many fictional stories on here, I just realized, "she" is you. I apologize if that came across insensitive.
Don't worry, I didn't take it personally 🙂
Excellent!
Thank you so much for reading my work 🙏
Ok, I didn’t know what to expect, but I really liked it. It went from playful, to nerdy, to deeply emotional. It felt like being on a rollercoaster. But I didn’t feel any cringe.. There’s warmth to your writing. That’s a very nice read!❤️
Is the drawing also yours?
Also I forgot to credit the artist I work with her name is Jean Woods. She does all the art I use for my Substack posts and all my art for my book as well.
Thank you. I appreciate you sharing the detail of how the piece made you feel. I am glad you liked it. Definitely human right? 😂
I was 'sent' here by the lovely Vera and this was one helluva story! Really enjoyed this :)
Liza, this is incredibly evocative! You have a gift for tactile prose. I could feel the rough denim, the metal-scented sweater, and the heat of the beaver fur. Nice work!
You are not alone again! You have thoughts with you forever, which will generate heat in icy cold atmosphere in the Arctic region. You are not alone forever! He will be waiting very eagerly to spend the rest of his life with you.
Bravo. Big fan of your writing.
Thank you. I appreciate you showing up here. It means a lot ❤️
Wow... Riveting. Loved every drop of this. You're such a gifted writer and passionate, poetic, Loving Soul. Great work!!!! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟✨️
And... Sorry that it didn't go the way you maybe wanted. At least some beautiful art and likely deeper wisdom emerged. Your Authenticity expressed is such Medicine!!! 💯✨️
Thank you, Cora. I definitely get some amazing art out of my experiences. I might want different but I still have this and I am grateful. Lonely, but grateful. ❤️
This too shall pass… You're too glorious not to be epically celebrated on Love!!!! 💜💯🌟🌿✨️